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Misc Forums => Writer's Block => Topic started by: kit on January 18, 2009, 09:43:29 PM
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this poem is open to criticism and comments and other stuff... and I know it's kind of bad.
But, I expect you'll all love it ardently of course :w:
about the colors...um...yeah. I had fun with them.....
I happened upon far away place
a place I'd never been before
the people there were indeed quite strange
and traveled in packs of four.
Yes, It was a very interesting place
and I couldn't believe what I was seeing
but I was lost and couldn't find my way
so I was stuck there for the time being.
Some people had orange skin,
and eyes that were empty and wide.
Others had multi-colored arms
that grew according to the tide.
Some people had green skin and tails
and were nearly ten feet tall
others had purple skin with scales
but were actually rather small
I saw a robot walking around
with a device that was rather neat,
and a hobo man who had feet instead of hands
and hands instead of feet.
I know my story is very strange
but honestly, it's true
so make sure not to get lost
or else this might happen to you.
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this poem
I... I actually enjoyed it!
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I... I actually enjoyed it!
I did too; also the colors made parts of it look sort of 3D-ish. :-D
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I did too; also the colors made parts of it look sort of 3D-ish. :-D
Me too except for the white letters I had to highlight to find the stanza.
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Me too except for the white letters I had to highlight to find the stanza.
Skin problems.
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Skin problems.
I haven't had acne in years.
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Psoriasis?
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Not me. Maybe ivan.
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No, thanks, I'm full.
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I like your face
I like your ass
Let's get together
After class.
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and a hobo man who had feet instead of hands
and hands instead of feet.
"Well, if it isn't my old friend Mr. McGregg...with a leg for an arm, and an arm for a leg!"
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this poem is open to criticism and comments and other stuff... and I know it's kind of bad.
But, I expect you'll all love it ardently of course :w:
about the colors...um...yeah. I had fun with them.....
[snip]
I stopped reading when I saw that you used colors. Bad form. Bad form.
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Oh freddled gruntbuggly,
Thy micturations are to me
As plurdled gabbleblotchits
On a lurgid bee
That mordiously hath bitled out
Its earted jurtles
Into a rancid festering
Now the jurpling slayjid agrocrustles
Are slurping hagrilly up the axlegrurts
And living glupules frart and slipulate
Like jowling meated liverslime
Groop, I implore thee, my foonting turlingdromes
And hooptiously drangle me
With crinkly bindlewurdles,
Or else I shall rend thee in the gobberwarts with my blurglecruncheon
See if I don't.
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Oh freddled gruntbuggly,
Thy micturations are to me
As plurdled gabbleblotchits
On a lurgid bee
That mordiously hath bitled out
Its earted jurtles
Into a rancid festering
Now the jurpling slayjid agrocrustles
Are slurping hagrilly up the axlegrurts
*seizures*
And living glupules frart and slipulate
Like jowling meated liverslime
Groop, I implore thee, my foonting turlingdromes
And hooptiously drangle me
With crinkly bindlewurdles,
Or else I shall rend thee in the gobberwarts with my blurglecruncheon
See if I don't.
*falls into coma*
*dies*
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Then you'll absolutely LOVE this:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pRisDso99s0 (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pRisDso99s0)
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What are you babbling on about now?
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i feel a little fight :evil:
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:-) 12 <3 BS 2!
...wanna wrestle some more? :evil:
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Only if there's mud involved.
Harcourt!
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Harcourt!
Excellent reference! 8-)
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/me bows