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Title: My poem opinion's please (Please no expletives)
Post by: Grey on October 30, 2010, 05:05:26 PM
The woods they are empty
the sprites are all gone
the fairies have left
and the trolls are all done.

The untrodden paths are becoming few
and the fairytale creatures bid us adieu
I walk through the forests of stories untold
of dwarves and dragons and knights O' so bold.

I hear the trees whisper of these marvellous things
and wonder what tales the rowan will sing
so I look and I listen for the folk of the wood
and write out their tales in my little blue book.
Title: Re: My poem opinion's please (Please no expletives)
Post by: xolik on November 04, 2010, 07:04:42 PM
The boards they are empty
the sprites are all gone
the fairies have left
and the trolls are all done.

A little fixed up and voila! You have "Ode to Hackernetwork!"

Actually, I liked your poem.