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Writer's Block / a poem
« on: January 18, 2009, 09:43:29 PM »
this poem is open to criticism and comments and other stuff... and I know it's kind of bad.
But, I expect you'll all love it ardently of course
about the colors...um...yeah. I had fun with them.....
I happened upon far away place
a place I'd never been before
the people there were indeed quite strange
and traveled in packs of four.
Yes, It was a very interesting place
and I couldn't believe what I was seeing
but I was lost and couldn't find my way
so I was stuck there for the time being.
Some people had orange skin,
and eyes that were empty and wide.
Others had multi-colored arms
that grew according to the tide.
Some people had green skin and tails
and were nearly ten feet tall
others had purple skin with scales
but were actually rather small
I saw a robot walking around
with a device that was rather neat,
and a hobo man who had feet instead of hands
and hands instead of feet.
I know my story is very strange
but honestly, it's true
so make sure not to get lost
or else this might happen to you.
But, I expect you'll all love it ardently of course
about the colors...um...yeah. I had fun with them.....
I happened upon far away place
a place I'd never been before
the people there were indeed quite strange
and traveled in packs of four.
Yes, It was a very interesting place
and I couldn't believe what I was seeing
but I was lost and couldn't find my way
so I was stuck there for the time being.
Some people had orange skin,
and eyes that were empty and wide.
Others had multi-colored arms
that grew according to the tide.
Some people had green skin and tails
and were nearly ten feet tall
others had purple skin with scales
but were actually rather small
I saw a robot walking around
with a device that was rather neat,
and a hobo man who had feet instead of hands
and hands instead of feet.
I know my story is very strange
but honestly, it's true
so make sure not to get lost
or else this might happen to you.