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a poem
« on: January 18, 2009, 09:43:29 PM »
this poem is open to criticism and comments and other stuff... and I know it's kind of bad.
 But, I expect you'll all love it ardently of course  :w:
about the colors...um...yeah. I had fun with them.....


I happened upon far away place
a place I'd never been before
the people there were indeed quite strange
and traveled in packs of four.

Yes, It was a very interesting place
and I couldn't believe what I was seeing
but I was lost and couldn't find my way
so I was stuck there for the time being.

Some people had orange skin,
and eyes that were empty and wide.
Others had multi-colored arms
that grew according to the tide.

Some people had green skin and tails
and were nearly ten feet tall
others had purple skin with scales
but were actually rather small

I saw a robot walking around
with a device that was rather neat,
and a hobo man who had feet instead of hands
and hands instead of feet.

I know my story is very strange
but honestly, it's true
so make sure not to get lost
or else this might happen to you.




« Last Edit: January 19, 2009, 06:42:52 PM by kit »
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Re: a poem
« Reply #1 on: January 19, 2009, 12:55:58 PM »
Quote from: kit on January 18, 2009, 09:43:29 PM
this poem

I... I actually enjoyed it!
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Re: a poem
« Reply #2 on: January 19, 2009, 04:53:46 PM »
Quote from: ivan on January 19, 2009, 12:55:58 PM
I... I actually enjoyed it!


  I did too; also the colors made parts of it look sort of 3D-ish. :-D
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Re: a poem
« Reply #3 on: January 19, 2009, 06:19:53 PM »
Quote from: 12AX7 on January 19, 2009, 04:53:46 PM
  I did too; also the colors made parts of it look sort of 3D-ish. :-D

Me too except for the white letters I had to highlight to find the stanza.
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Re: a poem
« Reply #4 on: January 19, 2009, 06:45:34 PM »
Quote from: dcrog on January 19, 2009, 06:19:53 PM
Me too except for the white letters I had to highlight to find the stanza.

Skin problems.
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Re: a poem
« Reply #5 on: January 20, 2009, 08:06:18 AM »
Quote from: ivan on January 19, 2009, 06:45:34 PM
Skin problems.

I haven't had acne in years.
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Re: a poem
« Reply #6 on: January 21, 2009, 02:23:17 PM »
Psoriasis?
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Re: a poem
« Reply #7 on: January 21, 2009, 04:34:13 PM »
Not me.  Maybe ivan.
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Re: a poem
« Reply #8 on: January 21, 2009, 04:38:52 PM »
No, thanks, I'm full.
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Re: a poem
« Reply #9 on: January 22, 2009, 12:57:12 PM »
I like your face
I like your ass
Let's get together
After class.
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Re: a poem
« Reply #10 on: January 22, 2009, 01:36:22 PM »
Quote from: kit on January 18, 2009, 09:43:29 PM
and a hobo man who had feet instead of hands
and hands instead of feet.

"Well, if it isn't my old friend Mr. McGregg...with a leg for an arm, and an arm for a leg!"
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Re: a poem
« Reply #11 on: January 23, 2009, 02:31:55 PM »
Quote from: kit on January 18, 2009, 09:43:29 PM
this poem is open to criticism and comments and other stuff... and I know it's kind of bad.
 But, I expect you'll all love it ardently of course  :w:
about the colors...um...yeah. I had fun with them.....
[snip]
I stopped reading when I saw that you used colors.  Bad form.  Bad form.
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Re: a poem
« Reply #12 on: January 23, 2009, 04:03:06 PM »
    Oh freddled gruntbuggly,
    Thy micturations are to me
    As plurdled gabbleblotchits
    On a lurgid bee
    That mordiously hath bitled out
    Its earted jurtles
    Into a rancid festering
    Now the jurpling slayjid agrocrustles
    Are slurping hagrilly up the axlegrurts
    And living glupules frart and slipulate
    Like jowling meated liverslime
    Groop, I implore thee, my foonting turlingdromes
    And hooptiously drangle me
    With crinkly bindlewurdles,
    Or else I shall rend thee in the gobberwarts with my blurglecruncheon
    See if I don't.
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Re: a poem
« Reply #13 on: January 23, 2009, 11:07:55 PM »
Quote from: xolik on January 23, 2009, 04:03:06 PM
    Oh freddled gruntbuggly,
    Thy micturations are to me
    As plurdled gabbleblotchits
    On a lurgid bee
    That mordiously hath bitled out
    Its earted jurtles
    Into a rancid festering
    Now the jurpling slayjid agrocrustles
    Are slurping hagrilly up the axlegrurts
*seizures*
Quote from: xolik on January 23, 2009, 04:03:06 PM
    And living glupules frart and slipulate
    Like jowling meated liverslime
    Groop, I implore thee, my foonting turlingdromes
    And hooptiously drangle me
    With crinkly bindlewurdles,
    Or else I shall rend thee in the gobberwarts with my blurglecruncheon
    See if I don't.
*falls into coma*

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Re: a poem
« Reply #14 on: January 24, 2009, 02:12:36 AM »
Then you'll absolutely LOVE this:

 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pRisDso99s0
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Re: a poem
« Reply #15 on: January 24, 2009, 02:45:32 AM »
What are you babbling on about now?
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Re: a poem
« Reply #16 on: July 04, 2009, 05:14:44 PM »
i feel a little fight  :evil:
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Re: a poem
« Reply #17 on: July 05, 2009, 05:03:11 AM »
   :-)  12 <3 BS 2!





  ...wanna wrestle some more?  :evil:

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Re: a poem
« Reply #18 on: July 08, 2009, 06:31:27 PM »
Quote from: bananaskittles on July 05, 2009, 11:05:52 AM
Only if there's mud involved.

Harcourt!
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Re: a poem
« Reply #19 on: July 09, 2009, 03:02:08 PM »
Quote from: pbsaurus on July 08, 2009, 06:31:27 PM
Harcourt!

Excellent reference!   8-)
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Re: a poem
« Reply #20 on: July 09, 2009, 08:40:31 PM »
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