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How many people if any would do the following?

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Voting closed: June 02, 2003, 11:26:54 PM


Author Topic: "Beds of Blood" By: Xander Bryans (DeCOY)  (Read 2627 times)

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"Beds of Blood" By: Xander Bryans (DeCOY)
« on: June 02, 2003, 11:26:54 PM »

assuming i get off my lazy bum and decide to post this not very graphic at all novel on The Geekery i was wondering exactly what the poll is asking. I welcome any and all editorials or opinions. Beware the constant shift of narrator, thats intentinal, and beware the bad grammar, run on sentences, bad seplling, and my in ability to type correctly because most of it would really be quite awful. However it is Sci-Fi future about a place called Genova and youll learn the rest as you go. I ve been playing with a lot of ideas so if something just seems to stop or suddenly change bear with me and tell me about it (most writers are very ecclectic). I might have some screwy name conflicts tell me about those too, and if you get confused tell me this needs to be idiot friendly and still have deeper meaning, im hopeing to get published one day so i ask of you not to be too harsh but punish where punishment is do. and by the way just because you give me your idea doesnt mean ill use it, i dont mean to sound rude but its true so dont feel self concsience or somethin. I also virtually never revise anthing until after someone else has critiqued it, i dont know why i just dont so there will be a TON of errors
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"Beds of Blood" By: Xander Bryans (DeCOY)
« Reply #1 on: June 03, 2003, 12:31:00 AM »

While I don't seem to be capable of finishing any work of my own, I am very adept at critiquing the works of others. I might not always be kind, but I will try to be as helpful as possible.

This does not preclude me saying "throw this shit out and start again."

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"Beds of Blood" By: Xander Bryans (DeCOY)
« Reply #2 on: June 03, 2003, 06:39:05 AM »

I'd definitely read it.
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"Beds of Blood" By: Xander Bryans (DeCOY)
« Reply #3 on: June 03, 2003, 09:17:24 AM »

Quote from: Lacerda
While I don't seem to be capable of finishing any work of my own, I am very adept at critiquing the works of others. I might not always be kind, but I will try to be as helpful as possible.

This does not preclude me saying "throw this shit out and start again."

 :P
This is the category in which I fall as well.  I used to edit my best friend's work before he submitted it anywhere; I discovered it's actually something I didn't mind doing.

Maybe I should have gone into that.
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"Beds of Blood" By: Xander Bryans (DeCOY)
« Reply #4 on: June 03, 2003, 12:19:35 PM »

At least i got some replies i expected everyone to throw it in my face. But itll take me a few days to post it somewhere or get it out to everyone so im open to any ideas, but first i need to get home im currently at the grandmas house, with the wolf and little red riding hood. So if anyone knows how i could do that please spread your wealth of knowledge
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"Beds of Blood" By: Xander Bryans (DeCOY)
« Reply #5 on: June 03, 2003, 12:43:13 PM »

I'll host it for you if you like.  I've nothing better to do.  Just AIM me.  HeavyJay2
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"Beds of Blood" By: Xander Bryans (DeCOY)
« Reply #6 on: June 06, 2003, 11:38:01 PM »

Unfourtanetly the fates are against me i have returned from my trip to the big "T" amd now i have discovered my laptop motherboard fried, and a forty page novel destroyed. Unless someone knows how to retrieve it from a dead PC or i can find the disk OR my friend gets off his lazy bum and sends me a copy that he was critiqing afterwards i will be more than happy to give it to you for hosting HeavyJay
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"Beds of Blood" By: Xander Bryans (DeCOY)
« Reply #7 on: June 07, 2003, 12:54:08 AM »

Well.  That certainly sucks.
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